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RE: Finish my freewrite, earn steembasicincome shares and upvotes!

in #freewrite7 years ago

Aha! I knew I smelled something brewing! Great minds and all. I like it! Nice of you to put some monetary reward on it.

Here's my take:

There was a glimmer of hope, so faint yet full of potential. In a world on encroaching darkness, any sliver of light would suffice. The greatest minds of Earth pooled together to formulate a solution to the waspy threat. Alas, congregating in one place made them an easy target. All hope was wiped out in a matter of minutes.

After a few months, humanity was all but extinct and the wasps were faced with a new threat. Ever since they acquired the taste for human flesh, they couldn't go back to a more basic diet. They turned on each other and feasted on their own species. The hive was broken, and there were several overlords that shouted contrasting commands.

As their numbers dwindled, they realized that there was still one last human alive. Unfortunately for me, I was that last human. So, they banded together and turned their attention towards me. This is the story of my farewell.

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Good or bad, you can always smell something in the freewriting hell's kitchen 😉 I really like your ending for the fact that you changed completely the perspective by erasing us from the face of earth! I forgot to add: I will run other two contests (mon/tue/wed), all the results will be given on monday 5th, 11 pm, UTC +1 (Cali is UTC -8).

If I do rank, and I don't notice it, feel free to let me know wherever. I wanted to snuff out hope, s'why I erased us from the face of the Earth. Yes, I do believe the planet would be better for it haha!

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Why do I see a bead of sweat on that emoji? Is that a sign that I've already lost? Haha!

No, I agree with you Mr. Smith 😉 the sweat means that unfortunately you are right heheh

Hahaha whew! Here I thought I would need to go biblical and release my wasps for real. It'll have to wait. Good thing I have a few cows to tide them over.