Thank you. I actually had an idea that would have been really difficult to translate to the written word. It's sort of like a place that can only exist for a couple of hours so people were allowed there for that couple of hours but it didn't exist at any other time so people were prevented from going there any other time.
I think that this story almost gets the point across but at the same time kind of walks over into a Twilight Zone area which isn't really the direction I wanted to go with it....... but then again you're not supposed to take that long on these freewrites.........so I just kind of let it go where it went.
Yes. It was twilight zone (ish) and I could see it being a Black Mirror Episode.