Making you feel uncomfortable or making an inappropriate criticism is my last intention.
But I must say that I notice a prevalence of sad notes in your writing.
I wish from the bottom my being, to be wrong. I wish you are well and that your writing is not a reflection of the ailments of the soul.
I see that you are very good for poetry. Sometimes I have written poems. But I think they are not good.
Warm hugs for you.