Very good narrative writing work. Something cruel to me because on many occasions I have been in front of that red curtain and it is very difficult to speak when you have an honest or mocking audience. That man must have been paralyzed !! Perhaps I would have liked to know, in your fiction narrative exercise, what did that man think? Where were his thoughts that his words didn't come out? Congratulations!! You have the beginning of a great dramaturgical work. Greetings, @zeldacroft
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