Ah, you went the natural way with it - no spookiness. Although I am not following as to what has happened. In the prompt, it was Nathan who was calling Mark to come over and was expecting his arrival. In your version, it was Nathan who came over all covered in leaves avoiding his parents policing. Yet the prompt stated that Nathan's mom went to work. So I am confused. :)
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Oh my goodness I did mix up the names! I'll edit it now thanks for pointing that out. oopsie!
No problem! Now that's you clarified it. It's all cool! :)