THE LAST PARTY

in #freewrite7 years ago

Hello guys, @pasaift here.
I'm doing a freewrite led by @mariannewest and the prompt for today is PARTY

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It wasn't long I got into the University, I had no friends there as none of my previous friends got admission into the same school with me. So I had to make new friends. I happened to meet Devin, who was a rich student and a low key guy. Had no idea how he made his cash or I should say I didn't care to ask how he made his money. Years passed and I and Devin were like best of friends, or so I thought.

One day Devin decided to host a small party, only few select individuals were invited and obviously I also got an invitation. The party was dope, there was lots of drinks to go round and the DJ was lively. I didn't drink much, so was surprised when I started feeling dizzy. My head was too heavy that I passed out.

I woke up in what looked like a basement tied to a table. I was definitely scared when my gaze came upon someone I recognized from the party. He was dead and his Organs had been harvested. Then an old man came towards me holding a scapel, I wanted to scream but couldn't because my mouth was tied. The door to this room opened and Devin walked in, I was very happy for my savior had arrived. I was so shocked when he said "Dad leave this one to me" then he bent over to my ears and said "I'll make it less painful".

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Beautiful to read.
Really worth my time

Glad you loved it, thanks

Sure I super do.
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Wow! Sometimes fun is dangerous!

Yeah, sometimes it is

Well, that was an unexpected ending! In hindsight, I guess the character should have been more curious about the money! :D

True. We shouldn't let money blind us

Whoa, what a twist! Excellent freewrite!

Thanks a lot, I appreciate

Wow, that really was an interesting one. I was like, yeah party, wait WHAT? Very dark, and I must say, my style. See, that's why I don't go to parties. Great read, though.

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Thank you. Not allong parties would turn out like this, you should try some. Definitely joining today's prompt

Oh my God...so, he was obviously a ritualist?, na waoo. Haven been a close friend through school and he could do this, then wahala dey between me and my best friend walahi....nice story bro.

Hahaha. No hold your friend oh. Thanks