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RE: Eagle on high, wings ablaze. Freewrite.

in #freewrite5 years ago

@girlbeforemirror,

A half dozen writing prompts ... all at the same time.

Show off.

Not all gas leaks will seal your fate
Some more benign destroy a date
Blow chances of impending mate
Blaze breeching hope to consummate

Brilliant. There's that famously (infamously) sublime sense of humor. :-)

This is a treasure we have had for a long time. My husband is my raven, he has carried me on his wings forever.

Some day I'm going to write a poem about him. You are a lucky gal.

Quill

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Quill!!! Hello!
No small feat, that, all the prompts pulled together at once. "Sublime" sense of humor too.
I like these two lines in particular:
Upon the hue I sense a leak
The lightest feathered touch does speak

Is it the pentameter, the imagery, the rhyme, the every thing....
Off now to go see what @quillfire had been up to!