Absolutely heart breaking byn. The writing was excellent and really immersed me in the mind of Sarah.
Some people might find the ending too bleak, but for me it was a fine example that sometimes stark realism is what hammers home the theme of a fiction. Really great writing.
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I thought from the beginning that it would be a sweet story... but that ending just didn't flow. I had to follow the story where it wanted me to go. I thank you for your comments and your support over the past year. You've been awesome!
Belated New Year wishes @byn.
".....but that ending just didn't flow."
You are perfectly ✔
Because we can't force end a story in a positive way.
" I had to follow the story where it wanted me to go."
Hence the story ended NATURALLY thereby giving it a perfect💯✨
Hats off to you @byn.
You're more than welcome. I'm just sad I can't spend as much time on steem reading great writers as I used to. Be well x
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Ditto that!
You all know I cannot abide tragedy and dark endings, and yet these are the most memorable stories. Who'd remember Romeo and Juliet if they'd married and had kids and died of old age after the family feud ended? *sigh