Day 116: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: canal

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He bid goodbye
to the love of his life
He chose a job in a cruise ship to try
even if it meant leaving his soon to be wife

The communication was constant
until he felt she was distant.
He was confident everything is fine
Drowned the thought with wine.

He has seen the beautiful canal and the horizon
But in his mind he thought of only home
Two years in the ship
seemed to quickly slip

He's excited to finally return
And ask her hand to marry him soon
Instead, he felt his heart ripped and burned
when he saw her about to give birth soon.

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If you leave, you cannot regret after.

True! You should know the consequences of leaving.

Well, I think it's a risk one must take .It's not fair to ask someone to wait for you and put their life on hold until you're done leading yours...Great writing. Keep it up ;)

here's today's prompt: https://busy.org/@mariannewest/day-117-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-church

Thank you! I agree. Our time shouldn't be dependent on others. :)

hmm - that is why it is good to stay in touch...

Do you know how to put a picture on your profile? I think it will help you to get more traffic...

Hi @mariannewest. I have been trying several times but my profile and cover photo just won't show up.

You have to host them on a different website and then put the URL. I will look for a tutorial

here is a link to the info on here
https://steemit.com/faq.html#How_do_I_change_my_avatar_image_and_other_profile_information

You could upload your picture into a comment and then use that link for your avatar. Refresh the page and it should show up. I am going to mention @snook here.She did a tutorial on how to make a header.

thank you @mariannewest and @snook. We'll do it today. :)

Wew! Nagsakit akong heart nagbasa ... Nice Miss :)

hahaha..ayaw pagsakit dra sir..heheh