Wow..!!! Sensing introduction of some other character... Or maybe the killer himself is staying over at that place??? But wouldn't Jonathan notice if some one is staying at an abandoned house right across his street?? Anyways excited to see how the story plans out...
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I thought about about that after I wrote it, and when I go back and edit the story I'll probably change that scene somehow, unless I could think of a way to explain it later in the story. Thanks for taking the time to read. Awesome!