You asked me for a critique. Sorry, I didn't mean to be harsh. I should have given more. I've been all over the map with launching the dolphinschool bootcamp with @markrmorrisjr. Anyway, you are chasing your readers away with those words. You've got to engage them. Drag them in, promise them an experience they'll never forget, and deliver. You have the skills, you're just letting your frustration show.
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You really made me think about my attitude towards writing on Steemit and how can I improve myself. I'm afraid your observations are quite correct and these tendencies of mine are showing even in my daily life. Thank you.
Look , I get it. I'm a cynic by nature myself. But, a few years ago, I started asking, what's the best that could happen, and taking time to be grateful for everything in my life, when I remember. We only hurt ourselves when we do that. We lose the one thing we want, companionship, because we become people no one wants to associate with. It's just as honest to look on the bright side. Every shadow is caused by a light.