It was a verge, an edge of the surf;
A song that fell from the turbine's
Screaming neck
It was a verse that refused to sit still.
The sea slapped the keel and she moaned
A dirge, a bikini sun smiling knowingly;
Oiled limbs dancing with salt and chilled wine.
The turbine twisted in a twirl,
Whipped her nose to the shore
The lights at the shore winked at the girls;
They screamed with the wheel
As she made a turn and faced the moon.
The turbine s stretched itself feet,
Brought out a pipe and a book
And the boat opened the sea to her bed
And the girls dove into her chill
And wandered among her sweet stink
For a while, the world was a mountain
And the sky was a sea with a round white ship.
I can't verse this in French.
#freewrite
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I am so glad you came to join us!! This is fantastic!! We have a new prompt every day and you will see that there are great people here writing their hearts out.
Wow!
Awesome poetry.
Thanks darling. I was a bit rushed so the editing was a bit poor. I am glad you liked.
I too was into poetry mode today, but the turbine was only in my head. I particularly love your ending, although I don't know if you meant it as part of the poem. I think it totally should be. Brilliant!
"And the sky was a sea with a round white ship.
I can't verse this in French."
It is a part of it. From the world became a mountain to the sky became a sea... 😂 #freewriting. I didn't do much thinking
Good for you! Freedom from thinking.
Great job! I love the imagery!
Thanks love. I am glad you like it
This is great! Versification with a nice rhythm!
Today's prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-88-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-see-below
Am sorry I missed Monday and Tuesday. where can I get Wednesday 's prompt?
Here:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-90-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-children