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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #29 (English)

in #haikucontest6 years ago

I'm copying your haiku here so that I can talk about it without the cumbersome going back and forth between windows.

Spring dawn green valley -
Many years sentry of sheep,
songs of birds again.

Here I know this scene has had enormous power for millenia, watched over by sheep for centuries, but every year the birds sing again come spring. It's a lovely moment in eternal time. Very good!

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Thanks @owasco. Appreciate the feedback. That's the intent of this haiku.