Let me be clear, I am glad you are getting the information out there. I have read other articles on the subject in the past and they substantiate the narrative you are sharing. My preference is the gather the facts and draw my own conclusions. I tend to interpret sensationalization as a tool to hype a topic when the facts don't quite substantiate the claim. In your case, I think the facts more than substantiate your claim and no sensationalization is need. The sensationalization then hurts your argument because it makes me wonder why you feel you need to sensationalize the article. But this is just my personal preference. I encourage you to finish your series and I will consider your argument as a whole rather than the parts.
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