Al principio dices que no escribes muy bien, difiero de ti, pues las líneas que has escrito se nota que son realmente desde tu corazón y por eso llega a los lectores, tu propósito es hermoso nada como compartir con la familia y esos amigos de verdad un abrazo y si todavía crees que no escribes bien la practica te irá puliendo, mi recomendación escribe y luego de unas horas vuelve a leer lo que escribiste seguramente verás algunos detalles a pulir saludos.
At the beginning you say that you do not write very well, I differ from you, because the lines you have written you can tell that they are really from your heart and that is why it reaches the readers, your purpose is beautiful nothing like sharing with family and those friends really a hug and if you still think you do not write well practice will polish you, my recommendation write and after a few hours reread what you wrote surely you will see some details to polish greetings.