This is really powerful and oh-so-beautiful, @neyxirncn - powerful... meditative and somehow hypnotic in the way you wrote it.
"And watch the stories told by the shadows on the wall. Dare to dance with them, even if it’s just a song."
The Light IS the answer and we need to keep a strong focus. I loved the way your suggested it doesn't dispel the darkness, but somehow clarifies it.
Eloquent and fully bilingual? Great job.
I experienced a lot of the anxiety I described writing this, it was tough for me, but the same Light kept me focused and going until I finished it. Poured a lot of emotions in this one!
And sort of! I have been an English teacher a lot of times in my life and I think I fully understand it, although when it comes to translating my Spanish writings it can be kind of difficult as I use a lot of slang words hahaha
Thank you so much for your feedback!
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It came across as raw and authentic - and very beautiful. It was a courageous piece. Hugs.