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Thanks jayna :)

It's hard to not revert to cliche and come up with pretty stilted metaphor when writing about metaphysical stuff like this. I think I did an OK job given that it only went through a few drafts.

It's always great to hear from a fantastic writer like yourself, to reassure me that my confidence in this one wasn't misplaced :)

Thanks again, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.