First person POV does has its limitations but you are correct, I was a bit too liberal with the "I"
Thanks for the feedback and enjoying the read 🙂
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First person POV does has its limitations but you are correct, I was a bit too liberal with the "I"
Thanks for the feedback and enjoying the read 🙂
True that. I read a lot of first POV and i find it amazing how they still get to play with words...
Hehe. It is a pleasure
hey i just read my comment back - and i probably could have thought of a better word than cringeworthy! hahaha - pardon that word please!😅
lol It's alright, Actually, it was a solid tip that you gave me. what you pointed out was a gap in the writing that would have gradually gotten out of hand cause I didn't take notice of it.
part of being a creative is taking things with a grain of salt. 😃
😅I guess so...Thank you for not picking offence