Wow. 👀
👏
Hello!
You can write, dude. Like really, really write!
I think Deep may be mis-translating some words? Gender seems to shift and one or two other words don't "fit". But if this is the translation from Spanish (!! - there's some incredibly good writing here!!) I'd team up with someone to check and adjust for you? An editor to go over final translation.
You are really good! And I'm not trying to score votes or anything.
@boxcarblue ... um 👀
I’m glad you’ve found him. He’s a great writer.
Thank you so much for your reading and your comment (and for the tip)! I'm so glad you liked it. Certainly, Deepl sometimes brings me problems with genders; it has a tendency to always put the masculine, even when the text came speaking in feminine. I have to change it by hand and check it several times. And, of course, there are always words that are difficult to translate (I often write with regionalisms for which I can't find the right tone in English). In this particular case, however, there is an intended play with gender, because it's about a trans person, who is perceived as female, but whom the father still perceives as a male. Maybe that's what you noticed? Although it could also be that there are other gender errors that I missed. I thank you again for your comment and I leave you a greeting!
Ah... I did wonder :) Very clever.
It translates rather beautifully. It hasn't lost the poetry / metaphor of your writing which is pretty amazing!
Greetings back to you. You're very good! Did you study?
Thanks again! Yes, I studied a long time ago, now I work as a book editor, mainly school books. !PIMP
You must be killin' it out here!
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Ah... that makes sense then!
Okay. Don't let school kill your creativity ;)
I'll be back!