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RE: Lo inesperado / The unexpected [Eng-Esp]

in Writing Club • 2 years ago

First of all, why did Lela have a gun with her?

The gun was her dad's and she had to make use of it. I'd definitely use my dad's if he had one😂.

And has her boyfriend always been a dickhead?

Since Caleb wasn't the texting type, when she saw a text from him, she felt it was strange and thought he was in trouble but couldn't make a phone call so my lady had to go rescue him with a gun😂.

I mean she had everything all planned out and was conscious at every sight of strangeness

Yep! She was indeed smart because imagine pulling the trigger in a case of a real attack when there's no one in sight, the sound of the bullet will lead the captors to you. I think Lela knew all of that so she had to keep her cool lest she fell a prey.

Good thing I wasn't her cause I would have pointed the gun at him to finish the whole madness

And gotten away with the diamond right 🥺. Now I'm regretting why I didn't twist that plot😂.

Nice write up dear!

Thank you very much ma'am 🥰.

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And gotten away with the diamond right 🥺. Now I'm regretting why I didn't twist that plot😂.

Lol, no regrets though. That was already enough for the twist

Thank you 🥰