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RE: Lo inesperado / The unexpected [Eng-Esp]

in Writing Club2 years ago

First of all, why did Lela have a gun with her? Has there always been a situation where she needed a gun perhaps for self-defense?
And has her boyfriend always been a dickhead?

And again, seeing she held herself back from pulling the trigger even with all the fear that gripped her shows she does know how well to handle this kind of situation. I mean she had everything all planned out and was conscious at every sight of strangeness

What a way to propose to Lela though. Good thing I wasn't her cause I would have pointed the gun at him to finish the whole madness 😂😂 just kidding though cause what if I mistakenly pulled the trigger? The whole story would change lol.
Nice write up dear!

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First of all, why did Lela have a gun with her?

The gun was her dad's and she had to make use of it. I'd definitely use my dad's if he had one😂.

And has her boyfriend always been a dickhead?

Since Caleb wasn't the texting type, when she saw a text from him, she felt it was strange and thought he was in trouble but couldn't make a phone call so my lady had to go rescue him with a gun😂.

I mean she had everything all planned out and was conscious at every sight of strangeness

Yep! She was indeed smart because imagine pulling the trigger in a case of a real attack when there's no one in sight, the sound of the bullet will lead the captors to you. I think Lela knew all of that so she had to keep her cool lest she fell a prey.

Good thing I wasn't her cause I would have pointed the gun at him to finish the whole madness

And gotten away with the diamond right 🥺. Now I'm regretting why I didn't twist that plot😂.

Nice write up dear!

Thank you very much ma'am 🥰.

And gotten away with the diamond right 🥺. Now I'm regretting why I didn't twist that plot😂.

Lol, no regrets though. That was already enough for the twist

Thank you 🥰