Hi Music Lovers and Original song composed by me❤️❤️🎶🎼
This is my Entry for Vibes Web3 music competition week 15Welcome to my musical channel @bigsteff
My submission on X
I'm doing a lovely and simple heart felt song about the love we need, and the love he have for us.
The love we have for him makes us crave for more. So I decided to come up with this song.
And I hope this song makes you feel what am feeling inside of me.
It won’t be long before the world will be over
The time we have on earth is to worship and lead souls to God
Cause the mind must grow spiritually to become capable of the spiritual guidance
Let’s build that capacity to make God be seen in our life and even in our generation,
Dwelling is sing is a road block on this journey pls take note.
I hope this song bless your soul.
I'm always full of joy that this vibes web3 music platform is where music can be expressed, enjoyed and shared. It's also encouraging and driving us for more musical creativity and Improvisations.
So, Enjoy Week 15 of the VIBES WEB3 Music competition
Remember this is a song that shows that we need him more, no matter how much we feel we know or have him. We not settling for less. As a Christian we need his love to keep going
Lyrics
how do i draw closer
it feels the world is going by so fast
it won't be long before the world will be over
make the vision known to everyone clearer
Dwelling in sin is always barrier
Please help us desist from it is our prayer
You are the one who is the way out
Please help our life so we don’t fade out
We want more
We want more
We want more
More of your love
Verse
God work in us both to will and to do, his pleasure through him
God made us perfect in every good works to do, his will through the spirit
Working in us that which is pleasing to his sight
And all men shall see the light.
The beautiful sunset filled me with a sense of delight
Please help us follow you right
I and you have to grow and eating bone like we are not baby
Only the spiritual mind can discern spiritual things and receive the leading of the spirit.
The mind must grow spiritually to become capable of the spiritual guidance
Please guid us lord
We have to do what ever it takes for you to love us more
We have been praising you but we feel it is not enough
We need more of your love
We need your love
More
how do i draw closer
it seems the day is going by so fast
it won't be long before the world will be over
make the vision known to everyone clearer
Dwelling in sin is always barrier
Please help us desist from it is our prayer
You are the one who is the way out
Please help our life so we don’t fade.
We want more
We want more
We want more
More of your love
End.
Trust you will love it.
@bigsteff
First just want to say, big respect for writin your original music
You are getting better with time
Honestly the whole song idea is fire
I hear it in my head how it is supposed to sound
Your singing needs more work and practice
Your notes are off and the melody is not in the right key
But as far as structure and song layout and the message and the lyrics
And the meaning and context, plus your flowing, (the rhymes could be improved upon)
All that is great, and I can tell you wrote this with your heart mind and soul
Which makes the song profound and powerfully deep.
Send me the beat to this song, i want to show you how you can make improvements on it for the future in case you perform it somewhere else.
You can reach me on discord or telegram at @VerbalD
Big thank you for your response on this,
We keep hitting the resistance line until we forcefully break out with a long, strong candle. 🤩
I’ll be sending you the beat asap my boss. much respect 🫡
hi bro, this music and lyrics are very good, I'm sure you give your whole heart to fill everything, and you enjoy this, but I'm sorry, there's something wrong with your vocals, I heard your tone and voice are not consistent, but I'm sure you can give your best again, you are a talented musician, big hug to my brother, your work is extraordinary🙏🏻🥰🤗
Thanks very much for your kind and encouraging comments. I really love hearing feed back like this. big hug from me to you brother, For sure they’ll be improvement
have a nice day bro
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He's the first person pls vote for me. Thank to and god bless you so much