Vibe web3 music competition week 13. An original composed by me.

in Vibes9 months ago

Hi Music Lovers ❤️❤️🎶🎼


This is my Entry for Vibes Web3 week 13Welcome to my musical channel @bigsteff12

Here is my x link 👇

I'm doing a lovely gospel song that’s about prayers. This song is a way to express my level of faith, that it won’t be long for the suffering, hardship, problems of life to end in my life and your life. For us to start living the kind of life we want or we’ve been praying for. Let’s take advantage of this music 🎶 if you’re going through such similar challenges then we can pray our way out. Remember we can only be be realistic or reasonable if only we apply faith. I pray this song find a place in your heart to dwell. cause with this, my dream can start coming through
We all are champions. Stay blessed as you listen 🎧

I'm full of joy that this vibes web3 music platform is where music can be expressed, enjoyed and shared. It's also encouraging and driving us for more musical creativity and Improvisations I’m happy to be here

So, Enjoy Week 13 of the VIBES WEB3 Music Competition.

Remember, This song is all about prayers, that it won’t be long for the suffering to end, cause that is the promise the lord has for his children. You can also personalize the song cause I’m singing this from within me. If you’re facing same challenges then this is a song for you too. Enjoy

Lyrics

CHORUS

It will not be long for suffering to end.
That is the promise the lord has for his children
We can’t go alone he is the back bone
Let’s not be scared of any situation cause we are not alone

It won’t be long for the suffering to end.
That is the promise the lord has for his children

When you can obey his laws, he’s looking for a man to entrust with his wealth
Please desist rough, so you can be pataker of his wealth

oh no. The love I have for you is hundred percent (God)
I understand that you want us to stand out, and be different from the rest.

Because you wanna make it out? You have to keep doing your best.

Truly the race is not for the swift, but you have to run cause it’s a test.
I don’t care about those that have already gone
I just want to be the first
With my level of hustle, he cannot look away he must surely bless
I want abundant favour. Without me stressing to labour to live well.
To live well

CHORUS

It will not be long for the suffering to end.
That is the promise the lord has for his children
We can’t go alone he is the back bone
Let’s not be scared of any situation because we are not alone

I said to myself am gonna make it out and I’ll be so famous.
What ever I have lost, in the past, in the future I will find them all
Cause I cannot sit back, and watching myself getting lost.
I am a winner, and I don’t need the atitude of those that fall

I understand that you want us to stand out, and be different from the rest.

Oh no the love I have for you (God) is hundreds percent
Because you wanna make it out? You have to keep doing your best.

Truly the race is not for the swift, but you have to run cause it’s a test.
I don’t care about those that have already gone
I just want to be the first
With my level of hustle, he cannot look away he must surely bless
I want abundant favour. Without me stressing to labour to live well.
To live well

Then chorus

End.

Trust you will love it.

Thank you for watching.

Let's rock on 🎼

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@bigsteff

This is one of your strongest songs yet
Little by little, step by step
You're getting music in shape with every lyrical rep
Fame isn't important, but success will come, do your best
God giveth, God taketh away, we must enjoy what He'll bless
This life is indeed a test, and we want to be crowned like a crest
Have everlasting life once Death's put to rest
We must stay focused and never digress
And cry tears of Joy for Christ's return, when eyes have wept
Every knee will bow and every mouth Must Confess
He is King of Kings, Lord of Lords, Oh Yes!

Some constructive feedback: try staying in Key when you rap in the tone, you want to harmonize with the key of the beat, also, rap with more energy and passion, I want to believe what you're saying, it shouldn't sound like you are reading it off the screen or paper, you gotta add more passion, emotional control and conviction to your live performance, increase the energy and effort, don't be afraid to rap louder and be a Leader with your voice. I like the direction of your lyrics and subject matter. Try incorporating bible verses to draw inspiratkon from His wisdom and deepen the meanings of your songs. Overall, really good effort this week, with this original, keep going and growing and leveling up.

-@Verbal-D Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge

I really appreciate your kind words and advice on my music life.
I know am coming up stronger by the grace of God.

And about the voice coming out louder, it’s because I’m down with illness which I believe God is taking care of.
It started as sore throat then gradually I lost my voice but now it’s getting better. I was battling with this immediately after my week 9 music competition on here. so I couldn’t make it up to sing for week 10 until it got better, I forced myself to sing during week 11 and still I’m trusting God to perfect my healing ❤️‍🩹

Thanks for the correction, advice encouragement, but for now I’ll keep doing my best until this phase of challenge is over.

I have to start getting prepared for the next competition. It’s not easy, but lol it must be easy cause I enjoy doing what am doing. Writing song is sometime very difficult but won’t get discouraged cause I love it

Awesome 💯 even more impressive knowing it's an original.

Thanks so much dear friend. am happy you love it 😊

Uwc bro.
Are you on discord?

Yes bro are you there too?

Yes, what's your username or message me @graat there, you can check in the vibes community

I did messaged you on the general discord group. Hope my message finds you well. Thanks for your engagement bro

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Aww 🥰 am happy to hear this

You're welcome @bigsteff. Looking forward to you reaching your new target 😅

😍🥰🥰❤️ definitely you’ll see me win 🏆 😻😻

On fire bro!! 🔥🔥

Thanks my bro 👊

Nice one bro. Keep it up 👍

Thanks very much bro. Am sure you’ll love the next song to be uploaded on here by me. Thanks so much for your comment. It means a lot to me ❤️😍😍