This is one of your strongest songs yet
Little by little, step by step
You're getting music in shape with every lyrical rep
Fame isn't important, but success will come, do your best
God giveth, God taketh away, we must enjoy what He'll bless
This life is indeed a test, and we want to be crowned like a crest
Have everlasting life once Death's put to rest
We must stay focused and never digress
And cry tears of Joy for Christ's return, when eyes have wept
Every knee will bow and every mouth Must Confess
He is King of Kings, Lord of Lords, Oh Yes!
Some constructive feedback: try staying in Key when you rap in the tone, you want to harmonize with the key of the beat, also, rap with more energy and passion, I want to believe what you're saying, it shouldn't sound like you are reading it off the screen or paper, you gotta add more passion, emotional control and conviction to your live performance, increase the energy and effort, don't be afraid to rap louder and be a Leader with your voice. I like the direction of your lyrics and subject matter. Try incorporating bible verses to draw inspiratkon from His wisdom and deepen the meanings of your songs. Overall, really good effort this week, with this original, keep going and growing and leveling up.
-@Verbal-D Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge
I really appreciate your kind words and advice on my music life.
I know am coming up stronger by the grace of God.
And about the voice coming out louder, it’s because I’m down with illness which I believe God is taking care of.
It started as sore throat then gradually I lost my voice but now it’s getting better. I was battling with this immediately after my week 9 music competition on here. so I couldn’t make it up to sing for week 10 until it got better, I forced myself to sing during week 11 and still I’m trusting God to perfect my healing ❤️🩹
Thanks for the correction, advice encouragement, but for now I’ll keep doing my best until this phase of challenge is over.
I have to start getting prepared for the next competition. It’s not easy, but lol it must be easy cause I enjoy doing what am doing. Writing song is sometime very difficult but won’t get discouraged cause I love it