Oh this is definitely considered an original
With a nicely sung chorus at the beginning plus verses that are lyrical
You kept the rhythm on the rapping tight which is for me extremely important
You were flowing and running full throttle like a sure sprint
Just some constructive criticism to help you along the way
Your beginning singing chorus was nice and smooth, sampling the hymn
But the doubling up recordings at the end for the outro was off beat from one another
from 2:27-to the end
It happens to me too at times, when you double or triple on a recording, it has to be the exact same timing and delivery
Also for the melody on the chorus
when layering the tonality for harmonies and listening experience, try blending the notes more or trying a different harmony combination and pick from the best of them
Sometimes creating multiple harmonies will help you see and hear what works best for an original song
Try panning your recordings for the harmonies left and right so it is not direct full centered
It gives a cool effect. Hope you use these tips for your next entry
This one was probably your best one yet and you are improving! great job man, I love to see that.
-@Verbal-D Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge
Thank you so much man, I'll be sure to take all these into consideration for future entries
You're very welcome