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RE: VIBES WEB 3 MUSIC COMPETITION WEEK 29 || His Eye on Sparrow~ Lauryn Hill and Tanya Blount (Cover)

in Vibes2 days ago

You have a beautiful powerful voice, and this song suited you well

However I have critiques to give you for the future

My feedback is meant to help and encourage you, so please keep that in mind

This entry would have been better if it was one full complete uninterrupted take,
an unedited live performance with not many different takes/tries pieced together

This is like a compilation of your best takes, but when you really focus and practice, the live performance will become second nature and you'll be able to perform it all the way through without mistakes, or very few

I think I counted at least 6 different spliced video clips to make this one performance, the transitions weren't smooth, the audio was cutting and choppy, making it very noticeable, which interrupted the listening experience for this wonderful song you sang

Memorizing the lyrics, especially for a song of this tempo and length would benefit you as well, instead of holding the phone and looking down periodically, maybe that would help to reduce the amount of takes as well.

Overall, I really enjoy your vocal dexterity, vibrato and soulful control, but since you are already a previous winner, I have higher expectations for the potential you can display with your God given talent.

God bless

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Oh thanks so much for the Correction and observations, I honestly haven't properly scored the song to perfection,
I would definitely do better In my next entry,
Much appreciation and Love❤️