Thank you so much for the kind words and the effort you put into reviewing my story 💛
Deluxe is responsible for much of the strange vocabulary, admittedly. I've considered asking her to speak more in a more simple way but I feel like that would go nowhere ;)
It's worth mentioning that this was an incentivized review, but with encouragement to prioritize honesty (over praise).
Thank you again!
!PIZZA
Deluxe and her Lobsters! I should have understood that it was her fault !LOL
Do you think I should add it to the review? I didn't put it intentionally, as the the incentive, for me, was only to write the review, not for its content, which reflects my honest opinion :)
It was a pleasure and I hope my best was enough to give at least a bit of justice to your novel!
Also, I just saw that I called Dack "Duck" at the end of the review 😂