This is a piece of the story about colonialism in my country in the past. This also includes learning for the next generation to be aware of the importance of defending the country.
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This is a piece of the story about colonialism in my country in the past. This also includes learning for the next generation to be aware of the importance of defending the country.
The first part doesn't seem like that, it reads more like a myth or legend. Then you transition really fast to the other part. I do like your writing though ♥️
Have you thought about telling this in a poem style?