Says who ?

in Proof of Brain3 years ago


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He said, our land is rich.
Rich in nature, rich in tears.
The reason is, my homeland was born when God was groaning.
Right on his fifth moan, the trees sprouted into nirvana.
Its roots tore apart the earth, its branches stick out like sasmita.
Among all the trees, one of the most cherished plants was born.
God said his favorite plant was created to make him happy.
•••
It's hard for your little one to joke, if you forbid everything.
You sprinkle rice wrap loudly after your user is on trial.
You make the fields weeds, so that your stomach smiles full.
The little one is finished, like a wild animal that loses before the arena.
•••
God created, humans destroyed.
What is fair to the Lord, not to God.
The cheapest pleasure for the people, no longer present, the sadness is really stinging.
Now we are looking for a place where there is no place to cry over corpses.
•••
The romance of war ends in restlessness, due to the lust that colonizes.
You broke your guard, you said it's an asshole.
The count of months continues to grow, you say silence is accompanied by sadness.
Education is true, but it's like small talk that never goes away.
•••
Fighting tongues is the cheapest form of entertainment.
If we are still Mr. Mistress, we have privacy, there is no point in surrendering.
It's the right time to start a revolution, when you're not alone in bed.
Oh really sorry for the nation that is never peaceful when kissing a lover.
•••
Be aware from an early age, later you will win against the invaders of your own nation.

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Hi, this is a very powerful story :) It's a little confusing though. Is this a legend from your area of the world? And what does the last part mean?

With a small amount of polishing this post could easily be one of the top five I have read this week ♥️

#dreemer

This is a piece of the story about colonialism in my country in the past. This also includes learning for the next generation to be aware of the importance of defending the country.

The first part doesn't seem like that, it reads more like a myth or legend. Then you transition really fast to the other part. I do like your writing though ♥️

Have you thought about telling this in a poem style?

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