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RE: 🎁 560 VYB Giveaway! 🧠 Childseeker's War Contest #3

Woohoo, hot damn, I won! Congrats to fellow winners, and best of luck to all new entries!

For my entry in this giveaway, I have to return to this description of the fight between Junelight and the bodyguard. The description of her magic and its effects was just too good!

She channeled her cycle into Distanska Artwork and pushed a puff out, knocking the bodyguard back a few paces. Bettine had to sidestep him to avoid an awkward collision. The spectators booed.
They’re going to like this even less, I suspect, thought June.
The strand from the town held fast, so she pulled a little harder from it and found the rhythm for Icevein. Big Boy steadied himself, and her wispy friends suggested a brutal charge. Before he could get the balance to do it, she pushed the Icevein into his limbs. He cried out and crumpled in a heap. The booing came to an abrupt halt.

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I really did. I love a good, well-described fight scene. I could feel the tension and the risk while working with a vivid image of the magic which was helping Junelight to fight him. Was very cool.