This work is more approachable than some others that explore this theme and imagery.
Your writing certainly isn't cheesy. It is authentic and full of struggle, which is the very topic you have tried to discuss.
That makes it even more important to share.
Thank you for taking the time and reading me. I think in this latest series I have been more literal, to say the least, than in previous works. I always felt that with my work I was exposing myself to the world in an almost extreme way. That's why I feel that with my writing I've finished dropping the last veil that served me as a shield. Difficult, and even more so in a space open to the public. I think that's why I feel it's cheesy, maybe thinking that these are things that I wouldn't share in a place like this and end up doing it makes me feel quite insecure.
Revealing those insecurities makes us feel vulnerable. When we are in that stage, I believe that is the only time we can truly be ourselves; the frightened child we always have been. It's okay to feel that way. We're all feeling that way at some point or another.