Oh dear. I can think of so many ways this can end. Most of them are not good.
Poor Amy Brown. Whatever made you think of this sorry creature? I really wish I could reach into your story, grab that woman by the shoulders and give her a good talking to.
Now that's good writing. She is real to me :)
Thanks so much for your kind and insightful comment! I chuckled at your expression of concern for Amy because I thought the same in my head while editing it. The idea was to write about a character who is flawed, relatable and with a need for some connection and validation. This need can sometimes drive people to unusual acts like pray to a 'fairy godmother' for luck. Once Harry and everyone in the room saw Amy, she felt alive and seen.
The question is - whether Harry's recognition is enough or Amy needs to look inward for her validation rather than towards people. Of course, my line of thought is debatable. And you're right—she needs a good talking to! I appreciate your visit and support. Have a great day. ✨