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RE: The Worst Job? [Fiction]

in Freewriterslast month

Thanks so much for your kind and insightful comment! I chuckled at your expression of concern for Amy because I thought the same in my head while editing it. The idea was to write about a character who is flawed, relatable and with a need for some connection and validation. This need can sometimes drive people to unusual acts like pray to a 'fairy godmother' for luck. Once Harry and everyone in the room saw Amy, she felt alive and seen.

The question is - whether Harry's recognition is enough or Amy needs to look inward for her validation rather than towards people. Of course, my line of thought is debatable. And you're right—she needs a good talking to! I appreciate your visit and support. Have a great day. ✨