A Five Minute Freewrite: A Nice Illusion

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Jane ended her week very late. As she hurried her way down to the central motorpark she met a large crowd there. She couldn't believe her eyes because it was not a public holiday. Such crowds are usually seen during public holidays. She managed to squeeze in and buy the ticket. Thereafter she went to the bus to occupy her seat.

On getting to the bus, it turned out that a man was already occupying her allotted seat. At first, Jane gave him a hard look and then kindly told the man to vacate the seat because it has been assigned to her when she bought the ticket. Initially Frank did not want to give it up but because of the way and manner Jane approached the issue he simply said okay and took the seat behind Jane's.

Once Jane sat down, Frank greeted her. Jane returned the greeting and a light conversation ensued. During that time, Jane discovered that Frank has a spark and both exchanged contacts.

Few days later they met once again in a local pub. This time both had become familiar with each other. Frank expressed his deep feelings towards her. Jane simply smiled and told him to give her some time to think about it.

Some days later, she accepted Frank's overtures and even started making plans for a life with him. Frank on his own part was expectant too. Jane decided to pay him an unscheduled visit in his house. There, she met the shock of her life. Frank was already married with a child.

Jane upon discovering this fact was mad at Frank. So life with Frank turned out to be a nice illusion for her. She became ashamed and confused at the same time. She gathered herself and stormed out of the house vowing never to set her eyes on Frank again.

A Five Minute Freewrite: A Nice Illusion

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I hope she informed Frank's wife of his affair. Good story.
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What do you call moving from the west coast to the east coast?
A depression.

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No, she didn't. She simply stormed out of the house after seeing firsthand that Frank was already encumbered.
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