MI VIAJE

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Veo alguien que está a punto de vivir una vivencia a través de la realidad virtual


Siento que este tipo de práctica engaña al cerebro, haciéndolo vivir la experiencia como si en verdad estuviese ocurriendo


Por fin lo estoy probando mi sueño hecho realidad, entro en mi viaje virtual casi de inmediato me veo volando como un ave siento la brisa en mi cara, siento ráfagas de viento chocan contra mi cuerpo el paisaje es hermoso desde esta altura, la libertad en este cielo inmenso, me inspira sigo subiendo más alto por encima de las nubes, quiero explorar. Siempre me pregunté que había detras
de las nubes? aprovecharé está oportunidad para hacerlo, mi cuerpo se siente ligero,agarró un impulso veo una luz tricolor y algo que no logro distinguir trato de acercarme más ... cuando de repente algo me hala, pierdo el control.Oh nooo,voy en descenso ?que paso? mi corazón pulsa muy rápido, voy descendiendo sin remedio, pido auxilio, pero nadie está en mi entorno. Grito muy fuerte y alguien me quita las gafas. Que susto!!! se siente tan real que pensé que en realidad iba a morir.

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I see someone who is about to live an experience through reality.


I feel that this type of practice tricks the brain, making it live the experience as if it were really happening.


Finally I'm trying it my dream come true, I enter my virtual journey almost immediately I see myself flying like a bird I feel the breeze on my face, I feel gusts of wind hit my body the scenery is beautiful from this height, the freedom in this immense sky, inspires me I keep climbing higher above the clouds, I want to explore. I always wondered what was behind the clouds?
I'll take this opportunity to do it, my body feels light, I get a boost, I see a tricolor light and something I can't make out, I try to get closer... when suddenly something pulls me down... Oh nooo, I'm going down, what's happening? my heart is beating very fast, I'm descending without remedy, I call for help, but no one is around me. I scream loudly and someone takes off my glasses. What a scare!!! it feels so real that I thought I was actually going to die.

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Each word you wrote is well chosen and kept my attention. It felt as if I was wearing those glasses.

Gracias por tu visita, y tú apoyo, yo también lo viví escribiendola.

What a descriptive story of the experience while in virtual reality. I loved it, the tense moments of feeling helpless as one screams, but no one is there to assist. You took your readers inside the virtual reality lens and showed them what it feels like as you explore the sky.

Nicely done. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a good rest of your weekend.

!LADY

@justclickindiva Gracias a ti!! por tu apoyo, por leer mi publicación y por la solidaridad que has demostrado con todos los concursantes.

Hola @carmin311073. Agradezco tus amables palabras y tu apoyo. Disfruto mucho leyendo las historias de la Comunidad Freewrite. La creatividad en los temas del prompt es impresionante. Es un placer ayudar a patrocinar este reto.

Cuídate y que empieces bien la semana.


Hello @carmin311073. I appreciate your kind words and support. I thoroughly enjoy reading the stories from the Freewrite Community. The creativity in the themes from the prompt is awesome. It's a pleasure to help sponsor this challenge.

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