Life Sweet And Sour

in Freewriterslast year (edited)

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Oh life, you're like a mud pie,
A messy, mucky, malleable delight.
You're full of layers, depths untold,
A canvas waiting to be painted bright.

Your surface is a swirling storm,
Churning, twirling, ever-changing form.
But beneath the chaos, a calm sea,
A steady beat, a heart that's free.

You're a masterpiece, a work of art,
A creation that can break and start.
You're a journey, a winding road,
A path that's yours, and yours alone.

Your flavors are a mix of sweet and sour,
A balance of light and dark, no dour.
You're a dance, a song, a melody,
A symphony of life, a harmony.

Oh life, you're like a mud pie,
A delicious, messy, beautiful sight.
You're a gift, a treasure, a surprise,
A journey that takes us by surprise.


Let our children not grow up in a terrible world. Together we can make it better. It is our destiny to
suffer from the past, to long for the future, but to forget the present.
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This poem beautifully captures the essence of life in a vivid and imaginative way. The comparison of life to a "mud pie" is a clever metaphor, highlighting the messy, unpredictable, and yet delightful nature of our existence. The poem goes on to explore the layers and depths of life, emphasizing its complexity and the potential for positive transformation.

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Your flavors are a mix of sweet and sour

I love this description about life. This is so true. Life is mixed with both sweet and sour flavors. Days when things won't go smooth and other days, it will be like your lucky day. Thanks for sharing.

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A true life is a mixture of sweet and sour.
You have a good discernment of life.
Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
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