You managed to do a whole lot in just five minutes -- I could see the entire scene -- and that plot twist! Well done!
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You managed to do a whole lot in just five minutes -- I could see the entire scene -- and that plot twist! Well done!
actually I wanted o end it with a different way but the story and the lake of time drove me to this ending, thank you for reading .
Think of it this way ... you can write as much as you can in five minutes, but we're not going to judge you in this community if you write a few minutes more ...
yeah I understand it ^^