Desire (poem 7#) Deseo (poema 7#) Eng/Esp

[gatoguedexz]

Desire

I am an adventurer, I searched for your secrets to show.

I implored in your temple truths that were not mine.

I dug into you, even what you didn't want to say.

And I got hurt.

Then I was just a prisoner, but I didn't understand how to decipher your demons.

And I alienated myself from what I was supposed to be.

It was my ego that led me to harm you.

I only thought of myself and the fault lies with who in the end did not want to be a bad person.

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Deseo

Soy un aventurero, busqué tus secretos a mostrar.

Imploré en tu templo verdades que no eran mías.

Escavé en ti, incluso lo que no querías decir.

Y me dañé.

Luego solo fui un preso, más no entendía como descifrar tus demonios.

Y me aliené de lo que suponía que eras.
Fue mi ego el que me llevo a dañarte.

Solo pensé en mí y la culpa es de quién al final no deseaba ser una mala persona.

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Ilustración de taheki inoue
Poema numero 7#

Comments

[josemalavem]

Es interesante tu poema, @gatoguedexz, solo que en los tres últimos versos se hace demasiado directo y declarativo; no pasa así en los versos anteriores, escritos con talante poético. Saludos, @gatoguedexz.

[gatoguedexz]

Si estoy consciente pero me gusta el juego que crea en el tiempo literario como lector

[nildasalazar]

Hola @gatoguedexz me encanto tu poema, es profundo, conciso, directo, evocando la toxicidad de las personas en las relaciones y como al final siempre se daña a alguien. Abrazos

[gatoguedexz]

Igual gracias por leerlo :)

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