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RE: Fell Dragon Book 8 Part 47

in Freewriters29 days ago

The jarring change was intentional. Almost as if ripping you away from a happy moment to realise the seriousness of what is happening in the background. Then coming back to the bittersweet ending making you want to know more about what happened.
However, thank you for the insight. I'll see where I can make some improvements.