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Mia was fascinated. She had seen many animals today in the zoo but none wowed her like the little monkey that mirrored her actions. She ran to her mum, and asked "can I keep him?", sounding all excited. Zoe chuckled, "no baby, he belongs here". Mia became silent, and sad.
Zoo animals belongs to the zoo, little Mia had no idea, her mum would buy her a toy
A toy is good but i don't think it will mimic Mia's actions. Thanks for reading.
Simple and to the point ...nice
Thank you.