You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Justice Served Cold! View the full contextmeakey (51)in Freewriters • 3 years ago With all due respect, i just feel that the plot of the writeup wasn't well addressed.
If it was your plot, how would you address it?
At least giving readers a little detail on how the villains met their waterloo wouldn't be bad.
Don't get me wrong, the story is great but looks sketchy.