Pic1000 : This Isn't Goodbye

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It hurts so much,
That you are leaving,
It breaks my heart,
That we won't be playing games like we used to,
And we won't be racing home together from school.

You came into my life,
When other kids doesn't want to associate with me,
Where others saw a scared little boy,
You saw me,
You saw a friend!

I was an only child,
But I have a brother,
Thank you so much for being my friend,
Thank you for teaching me to stand for myself,
Thank you for all you have done for me.

Ben! Oh Ben!
I will miss you,
I knew you would stay if you could,
But you taught me,
That home is where the family is.

We shall meet again,
No,we will meet again,
This time I will count the days,
No matter how long it takes,
Till I get to see you again.

Nothing will stop me,
From seeing you before you leave,
Not even this heavy rain,
Will stop me from telling you,
That this isn't goodbye!

  • What do you see?

I see a boy standing in front of a car holding up an umbrella because it's raining.

  • What do you feel?

A feeling of sadness erupts from him. He is probably waiting for someone who might not show up or someone who is about to leave him.


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At first i thought is a break poem, the expression on his face shows he is really missing someone already.

He are right, he really is.

Thank you for reading.

One of those friends that you will never see again but that always leave indelible traces in life.

Yes, you'd wish they stayed with you forever.

Thank you so much for coming around.

this isn't goodbye!

There are many persons, whom we cannot let go easily!

I agree. We wish they can just be with us forever.

Thank you for stopping by.

The bonds of friendship that won't be diminished or broken by time and space. What a rare meeting indeed of a person befriending another who needs a kind gesture. One never knows what another person is going through. I'm reminded of a saying that we meet people for a reason, a season, or a lifetime. And each person comes into our lives and teaches us something or we give something in return. One never knows.

Thanks so much @rukkie for sharing this. A kind reading. Take care.

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I'm reminded of a saying that we meet people for a reason, a season, or a lifetime.

I agree. Sometimes when we remember all those people that had come into our lives and either smile and/or frown based on their impact in our lives.

Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts on this.

You're welcome. It was a pleasure. Take care.

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Friends are the family you choose and many times those loyal friendships save us even from ourselves. Beautiful verses. Well done! @rukkie 🤗🤗

Thank you so much for reading.

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How lost one can feel. I hope Ben feels the same and new friends will show up.

I hope so too