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RE: Caveman meets cavegirl

in Freewriters3 years ago (edited)

She walked over, leaned and kissed my cheek before taking her place beside me and asked, what are you writing today? face

It's frictional yet it feels true, This is a beautiful piece, I must say you're a blessed writer.

Wow! the caveman actually fell at first sight through the riffle's scope!.
But at the end they both got what they wanted : freedom from the world and also love🤗 ( I feel everyone wants love that's why I added it)

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Thank you for taking a read and commenting. I like to write these fictional pieces now and then,it allows me to stretch my imagination and writing skills a little.