Made Me Regret - A Poetic Practice

in Blockchain Poets2 years ago (edited)

Your priorities changed
Leaving me out of the equation
Turning yourself a new page
So why would I help with your frustration
Making it out like I walked out
When we both realised you had made a new you.
Treating me as the walk about
All the while you're not being true.
Solemnly I lived like we were fine
Thinking you were mine
All the while you'd move on another line
You hid it well leaving no sign.
Thinking like I've done it wrong
But you had started a new song.

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It hurts when someone you love moves on and doesn't communicate their feels with you.
For a relationship to work, there has to be open and honest communication.
I feel the pain in this poem xx

They say if you love them set them free. Well I've let them free, I feel shit about it but I've done it, now I'm just cruising life as it comes.

Being ghosted sucks and i know the feeling. Your poem also conveys it very well.. i hope we all recover from being ghosted.

It's unfortunate how people all of a sudden change, and one wonders what happened to all the promises.

Great poem

Yeah change is overrated especially when it affects everyone's lives all for the pursuit of ones whims.

Thanks for reading my poem.

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After reading your poem @akumagai , I sense that it could be an experience of someone who has changed their priorities and moved on, regardless of the damage done.

One can also see images of sadness, pain, betrayal and frustration, accompanied by a breakup or disappointment in a relationship.

Illusions sometimes cause us to see mirages.

Well written, thank you for sharing emotionally charged poetry.

It's sad not to be taken as a priority as we do to those who mean the most to us, and worse still is them pretending to care. It hurt so badly.

I hope you get back up and move on.