You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: measuring her hair

That one has kind of a funny story. The inspiration came from a regular old fruit tree that was next to a school I work at, and that was full of ripe fruit.

It seemed like such a shame to let such good looking food go to waste, and I was surprised that the school would let an opportunity to teach kids about such things slip by, so the poem came to mind.

What’s funny is that I mistook pomegranates for passion fruit. After I first wrote the poem I realized I had mis-identified the fruit, but when I tried to be true to the situation and real life experience, writing about pomegranates instead of passion fruit didn’t have the same effect.

So, the poem is a bit of a creation to purposefully make the reader wonder if there’s a Lolita thing happening or something like the Police song Don’t Stand So Close To Me.

Sort:  

The pomegranates fooled you, that is funny! They grow wild all over the US southwest. Passion fruit I would misidentify because I've never seen it in on trees before. Well done on that part, making you ponder the Lolita thing! Don't Stand So Close To Me is a little creepy in a way looking back now... Especially if it were my daughter!
!DUO


You just got DUO from @thebighigg.
They have 1/1 DUO calls left.
duo_logo
Learn all about DUO here.

It was more like I knew what the fruit was, but I connected the wrong word to it without realizing it. I didn’t grow up near pomegranate trees and having lived outside of the States for so long now, I don’t always recall the right English words at the right time. 🤣 It’s more common with words that I don’t use frequently.

Yeah, that Police song is a creepy one.