Hello @maggotmilk, after reading your excellent creative work, I leave you my analysis according to what I understood from it:
The poem “My Girl” is an ode to love and admiration for a very special person in the author's life. The poem is filled with a tenderness that feels genuine and authentic. The author expresses how this person gives him strength, how her love is a balm to calm fears, how her beauty is captivating and how her precious love is a gift to him.
Congratulations on your ability to communicate love and admiration in such an authentic way, and for the ability to make the reader feel empathy and tenderness towards the person you are referring to. After reading your poem, there is no doubt that poetry is a tool to convey deep feelings and emotions.
Thank you very much for sharing quality poetry.
Best regards.
Hey @jakim7, you hit the nail right on the spot with your analysis of my poem. It makes me tear up, really. As a guy, to reach this far on an emotional level, is quite hard.. since I'm not used to it yet. I hope to make poems like these more, but not as cheesy 😆
Thank you @jakim7