My girl, the sunshine in my day
Her smile, like a warm summer's ray
Her laughter, music to my ears
Her love, a balm that calms my fears
In her eyes, I see a world of grace
A gentle soul, with a shining face
Her beauty, like a work of art
Captivating, she stole my heart
Her touch, a soothing melody
Her voice, a symphony
Her love, a never-ending song
With her, I always feel strong
My girl, a treasure to behold
A rare gem, worth more than gold
Her love, a precious gift to me
Forever, my heart will be hers, you'll see.
xoxoxoxo
It feels good to know we have someone who can lighten up our day.
We really need to do this often, appreciate our loved ones. well done.
Yes! No matter how awful the day is going, you'd still know that our loved ones smile can turn things around. Thanks for the kind comment, @amiegeoffrey.
God bless 🙂
Ooh, such a heartfelt poem you have shared with us. The way which you expressed your emotions were very touching. Your words convey deep feelings and emotions. Amazing poem! 😊
Hi @bigabigail,Thank you for the kind words!
I'm not an emotional kind of guy but when it's about my girl things go out of my control.. 😆
Thanks again for the appreciation 😀
Hello @maggotmilk, after reading your excellent creative work, I leave you my analysis according to what I understood from it:
The poem “My Girl” is an ode to love and admiration for a very special person in the author's life. The poem is filled with a tenderness that feels genuine and authentic. The author expresses how this person gives him strength, how her love is a balm to calm fears, how her beauty is captivating and how her precious love is a gift to him.
Congratulations on your ability to communicate love and admiration in such an authentic way, and for the ability to make the reader feel empathy and tenderness towards the person you are referring to. After reading your poem, there is no doubt that poetry is a tool to convey deep feelings and emotions.
Thank you very much for sharing quality poetry.
Best regards.
Hey @jakim7, you hit the nail right on the spot with your analysis of my poem. It makes me tear up, really. As a guy, to reach this far on an emotional level, is quite hard.. since I'm not used to it yet. I hope to make poems like these more, but not as cheesy 😆
Thank you @jakim7