No sorrows or regrets
Single-minded push ahead
Bound to that time and place
Enchanted in the luminous ether
Think of nothing but return
To a place I still call home
I am not lost
I do not wander
I know exactly where to go
Why not rest and stop this yearning?
In a hierarchy there is peace of mind
Make myself the piece and fit
Right into the gap
The engines fire roar
To starry heavens point
Where nodes of meaning glow
Like waypoints on the trail.
Behind me earth recedes
As distance grows between us
Now I clearly see-
We spun and danced in love
Then said goodbye without a kiss.
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Only a poet who loves space and sci-fi would write this! 😅
This is beautiful. You capture the speaker's physical and emotional journey from earth into the cosmic realm. Wish I could travel into space and visit a planet or two. 😁 Nicely done. !LUV
Flying in space must be amazing. A friend of mine took me up on a plane ride and then dropped fast to simulate weightlessness. So I floated a little and it was wild.
What an adventure! If I tried this, I would probably scream my head off until my throat hurt. 🤣
The plane drop can make you feel nauseous so you better have the barf bag ready 🤢
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The universe also serves to make the verses flow beyond this world, between satellites and metallic ships that navigate the wide universal background.
I loved the poem and it is literally out of this world. Excellent work.
Thanks for sharing
It's tricky to write poetry about science and technology but fun to try. Thank you for reading @rinconpoetico7!
A great poem from another galaxy, I really liked the play on words you used in this writing, who knows if on other worlds they love and have more awareness in nature than we do, I really enjoyed reading this, excellent piece, thanks for sharing it bro ☺
Alien love, I like the sounds of that! Thank you @joseitosanchezs!
Behind me earth recedes
As distance grows between us
Now I clearly see-
We spun and danced in love
Then said goodbye without a kiss.>
Poignant lines these. The distance that has increased between the lovers in the once close relationship comes to an end and the pain shows.
It seems like this relationship was growing weak and the distance slowly increasing before it broke off.
Home is the place to heal.
Lovely!
Have a great day!
I love this. Thank you for reading, and for this great comment. Love sometimes feels like rocket science :)
I like so much your sci fi poem. It's an unusual topic.
Thank you @beaescribe! It's strange to write poetry with abstract sci-fi themes. Very spacey feeling. 😄
Hello @litguru 🚀, great combination of space age, technology and poetry, it is not very common to read this innovative style, I have enjoyed reading your creative work, for that reason I want to share with you in a simple analysis my personal point of view after reading you.
The poem “Guiding Star” seems to evoke the feeling of a trip to space, possibly to some place far from Earth. The speaker of the poem seems to be guided by a star, leading him forward on his journey. The poem also seems to suggest a certain sense of nostalgia for home, for the point from which the narrator has wandered away.
In terms of the structure of the poem, the literary style of poetic prose is employed, with some rhythm, to create a sense of movement.
In terms of the possible interpretation of this poem, it can be seen as a reflection on spatial exploration and the sense of distance and disconnection often associated with it. It may also evoke a sense of adventure and excitement about the unknown.
Thank you for sharing with us such an innovative spatial style of producing original and quality poetry.
Best regards.
Wow, this is an impressive review of the poem, and its thematic structure. Thank you for taking the time to write it up. You touched upon the key elements and skillfully wove them together. Marvelous! 🌟