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RE: Guiding Star- An Ambient Poem for the Space Age

in Blockchain Poets2 years ago

Behind me earth recedes
As distance grows between us
Now I clearly see-
We spun and danced in love
Then said goodbye without a kiss.>

Poignant lines these. The distance that has increased between the lovers in the once close relationship comes to an end and the pain shows.
It seems like this relationship was growing weak and the distance slowly increasing before it broke off.
Home is the place to heal.
Lovely!
Have a great day!

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I love this. Thank you for reading, and for this great comment. Love sometimes feels like rocket science :)