I enjoyed the theme of surrender in this poem and the way the final two lines hit. It was a nice way to bring about the ending revelation. I feel that a lot of beauty is revealed by our flaws.
I've always wanted to write a poetry book as well. I think having your own personal photos is awesome as well. I started making collections on peakd of poems that I'd want to include. That might be a good way to start.
Thanks for being a great member of blockchain poets.